Here We Go Again
Sunday, May 06, 2012 8:25 AM
Draft 3 can be put off no longer. My identical baby girls will be here in about two and a half months and who knows how much time I'll have to write once they're here. I have a 31 chapter, 173,000 word monstrosity that I need to do some serious revision on. If I'm going to do this it's got to happen now. I'd love to spend a few weeks fiddling around with short stories, but that will undoubtedly turn in to a few months and then it's bye-bye novel.  Right now, I'm out of grad school till August, my school-job is winding down with about four weeks left, and if I can get a running start, I'll be able to tear into this come summer time.

So, here's the plan:

For the next month while I'm still working days, I'm going to jump on this like I was still in grad school. Mondays and Wednesdays for three, solid hours a piece. Tuesday, Thursday squeeze in an hour or two. Devote Saturday or Sunday as needed. By the time school lets out, I want to be done with the first part of the book. Through chapter 9 (which might be the new chapter 7) would be ambitious, so I guess that's what I need to aim for. As for this week: I want to rewrite chapters one and two. I know that that is feasible; it's just really hard for me to figure out how much time certain tasks might take beyond that.

There are parts later on in the book that my wife and Copperhead think need very little rewriting. However, I know that the set of chapters right after the first two need huge, global changes. Still, this shouldn't be like draft 2 where I'm completely rewriting every word. There should be significantly more sections that I can hold on to in their entirety (otherwise, what progress would I be making?). For one, a focus of this draft is to cut it down to about 25 chapters and 150,000 or less. Taking things out is always easier than putting more in. I do have new material that needs to be inserted, but not in the form of scenes or characters or action (with a few small exceptions that are usually taking the place of something longer and unnecessary). Instead, I have the challenge of implementing changes that will span the entire novel (for example, I had the main character using a device called a hand that was basically a super-fancy iphone - the technology level should be way beyond that so I've come up with two ideas for far-future tech to replace that).

There will be times when I need to rewrite a chapter. There will also be times where I can rip out a few sections, tweak it up and give it a nice, polished once over and move on. That's the unique challenge of this phase of the novel writing process, and I just don't know how long this is going to take. All I can do is get started. Chapters one and two, here I come.

Until next time, I'm Eric and I'm an unpublished novelist.
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Thrice doth everyday fiction publish me
Wednesday, March 28, 2012 9:03 PM
Another of my sci-fi flash fictions was published today on EDF. Here is the direct link: http://www.everydayfiction.com/light-pollution-by-john-eric-vona/

Enjoy!
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Anticipation & What I'm Telling Myself
Monday, February 06, 2012 9:22 PM
I can't in good faith say that I'm doing a whole lot of writing at the moment. The good news is that grad school doesn't have me totally snowed under. In fact, two classes at a time seems totally manageable at the moment. I'm really excited to get cracking on the novel again, too. I finished draft two back in November, so I haven't taken a whole lot of time away from it, but I definitely haven't been working very hard on any other projects either. The thing is though, I'm just not that interested in short story writing at the moment. I have plenty of ideas, but they're all so early on in development, I don't see myself putting the time into them only to get (most likely) nowhere.

I know that's not the way a writer should think. I should be telling myself, keep churning stuff out and eventually you'll get published. Not just because that's what they tell you in writing workshops, but because I've seen it work in the few pieces I do have out there. It's no fluke that I've had mostly flash fiction published when flash fiction is the majority of what I write (excluding the novel). But putting in time to write longer stories, and a lot of them since that is most likely what it will take, just doesn't fit my current situation. Sure, I'll be devoting a lot more time to the novel, but in the end the pay out will be so much greater. At least, that's how I feel. Is it naive to think that my first novel will get published when it takes me so many tries to get a good product out of shorter works? I tell myself that in a way it's not my first novel because I'll have created so many drafts of it (and radically different ones at that), but I do the same thing with short stories and flash fictions and I have more of those sitting around my hard drive than I do in the pages of magazines.

Still, I'm excited to begin work on the novel again in a month or so. I've been getting a lot of great comments from my friend Copperhead, not to mention the great advice my wife has given me. I can't wait to hear what else Copperhead has to say and hear how some of my other readers react. I have lots of ideas, both my own and from others. I really should try to find time to write some short fiction before then, but time is sparse and the circumstances for me writing this are not normal. It's low and the priority list and, emotionally, I just don't know how to change that.

Until next time, I'm Eric and I'm an unpublished author.
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New Year, New Plan
Saturday, January 07, 2012 10:55 AM
Alright, so the plan isn't that new. It's different from last year's but it's the same overall plan. 2012 is poised to be a year of unparalleled change in my life, leaving me helplessly busy and most likely suffering from unrelenting fatigue and exhaustion. My full time job as a tenth grade teacher continues to consume most of my time and leave me routinely tired; however, as of next week I am adding the additional stress of my return to graduate school at USF. Two classes, two nights, not sure yet about the work load. I'll do what I have to do, because I have two and half years to get my master's degree so that I can be certified to teach (right now I have a temporary certification). This is not my passion, but my profession, and there are things I must do to keep myself gainfully employed while I pursue what is my true passion: writing.

The reason for this lies in the biggest news of all. My wife and I are expecting...TWINS! That's right, Mary is due in the middle of August with a pair of identical babies (don't know the sex yet). We were trying, but for one. This is such a huge surprise, because twins runs in neither of our families. We are very excited, but this brings with it a whole new host of incredible challenges. We may need to get a new, bigger house. We always said our little townhouse would work through one kid but we'd have to move when we had the second. They say if you want to make God laugh, make a plan.

Well I guess I'm going to be making God laugh some more. Here's the plan: regardless of all else, I must complete the third draft of my book in the next twelve months. This will keep me on target of completing a draft a year (the past two years I've been good at this). I think I want to see my book published by 2015 at the latest. This gives me time for several drafts and time to shop the work around to publishers and agents.

To make this happen I would like to hear back from my readers about the book by March 10th. That is the week of spring break for both my college and the high school where I work (how convenient!). I think this is reasonable. Two months for them to finish reading and let me know what they think (but y'all tell me if it ain't). That way I can use my week off to look over what they have to say, develop a revision strategy and maybe hopefully even get the ball rolling on writing. It's important that I start before my summer vacation. Because of the way the college schedule works, I'll be able to take two semesters (spring & a six-week summer session) before high school lets out for the summer. After that, I'll have almost two months all to myself before school starts again and before the babies come to try and complete the third draft of my book. I know that if I jump in cold-turkey, I won't be able to go from not writing to writing eight hours a day with any semblance of efficiency.

So, spring break, middle of March, I begin work on the third draft. Readers, please I beg of you, let me know what you think! I need your help. While it will surely be a struggle to find time to write while working and attending graduate school, I will fill my spare time with revision. If it's important you make the time, I've heard people say, and this is most definitely important. I figure if I can knock out a few chapters before summer and get some momentum, I'll have a receipt for success. While the end of this year may be the ultimate deadline, the hidden deadline is before the twins come and life gets really, truly crazy.
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Second Draft Complete (finally)
Wednesday, November 23, 2011 5:15 PM
Wow. It took four months longer than I'd hoped, but it's finally done folks. The second draft of my novel, Star Song: Detour on the Alkan Run, is complete. Before anyone sets off any fireworks, yes, there will most certainly be a third draft. And probably a fourth. But now that I've rained on the parade...HOORAY! It's done, sucka!


Looking back at when I finished the first draft, I can see that I got quite a lot of things right. First of all, I finished on time, with three days to spare. Maybe I should have set a more firm deadline this go around but I wanted it to be done by the end of August. Obviously that didn't work out...

I was quite insistent that the first draft was very, very rough. That couldn't have been more true. Somewhere along the way of fixing it I started calling it "a terd coated terd with terd filling." I said there would be lots of rewriting and that there was. The first draft weighed in at 30 chapters and 154,549 words. Draft two has 30 chapters plus an epilogue and is a frightening 173,095 words. It's way too long, and that needs to change. However, on the bright side, regardless of how long it took (my dad kept telling me not to sacrifice quality for speed) this draft is actually readable. 

And reading it people have been! I've been getting lots of great comments from my wife. I'm so fortunate to have married a woman who knows how to respond to writing. She isn't afraid to tell me what she really thinks and that's what a writer needs. My buddy Copperhead has been collecting his thoughts in a word doc and even told me he was going to read the whole thing AGAIN, straight through once I finished it all. Can't wait to get his thoughts. I know people are busy, but I'm so grateful to everyone who volunteered to look at it and tell me what they think. It's your feedback that will take this book from readable to publishable. You will be thanked in the first book of the next great science fiction series! I'm also happy for all of you who have asked to read it lately. I will need people to read the third draft as well.

To recap my accomplishments and goals:
First Draft: Terd
Second Draft: Readable
Third Draft: Publishable
Fourth Draft: TOTALLY INSANELY AWESOME NO WAY IN THE WORLD IT COULDN'T GET PUBLISHED AND BE A BEST SELLER

The third draft, too, will need plenty of rewriting and a lot of cutting, so please readers, consider what doesn't need to be there. I know I am. I'm starting grad classes again this spring, so you have plenty of time. I want to start on the third draft this summer, when I have lots of free time for a couple months.

Until then, I'm Eric and I'm an unpublished (still haven't been paid for in-print work) writer.
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Top Rated Story for October = Interview on Flash Fiction Chronicles!
Wednesday, November 16, 2011 5:09 PM
In case you missed it, here's a link to the short story I had published last month on Every Day Fiction. And here is a new link to their interview with the author (me!).

The folks over at Every Day Fiction take the top-rated story from any given month and do an interview with the author on their blog, Flash Fiction Chronicles. For an e-zine that barely pays their writers and is definitely drawing stories from struggling up-and-comers, I think this is a great way to give a little extra back to those whose work is well-received. At this point, it's all about getting my name out there, and what better way than to be interviewed on the blog of a well-known e-zine, boasting about how awesome my work is. TOP-RATED! WOO-HOO!

I'm very excited about this and extra proud of the piece, so pop on over and give 'em both a gander. Thanks to all who rated my story so highly!

I'm Eric and according to those links I've posted, I'm a published author.
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"All Goes Onward and Outward..."
Tuesday, November 01, 2011 9:14 PM
I could no longer wait for my novel to be complete. My short fiction had suffered neglect too long. I spent one day this last weekend putting a much procrastinated final revision on a short story, just in time to get it out for the Tampa Review's Danahy Fiction Prize ($1000 and publication, plus it feels a bit like the homecoming game, really want to win that one). However, I can't rely on that alone. The odds are against me. So, with the help of my lovely Misses, I've printed and stuffed and licked and now have five envelopes ready to go out the door. That may not seem like a whole lot but midway through the process I found that three of the other magazines I intended to submit this first round to now accept fee free online submissions. This is always the choice method. I also tossed another story out to one mag, so plenty going around. Trying not to let it sit on my desk.

Until next time, (and I'm hoping next time will bring some very cool news) I'm Eric yada yada yada.
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"There are Those Who Have the Stars..."
Wednesday, October 05, 2011 7:24 AM

Today on www.everydayfiction.com you can read my short story "There are Those Who Have the Stars..." Several Magazines turned me down for this one, commenting that it was too dark. I commend and thank the editors at EDF for publishing it. I wrote it shortly after I read Ernest Hemingway's To Have and Have Not, and consider it a scifi response to that underaprreciated novel set in my home state. Now that I think about it, I read that book quite awhile back so I must have shevled this one for awhile. Well, fortunately I resurrected it and it all worked out for the best.

Enjoy the read!

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Habitually Mandated Blog Update? "Not So Fast My Friend!"
Wednesday, September 28, 2011 6:43 PM
Yes, with the immortal words of Lee Corso, I tell you I intend to impart several points of interest.

First and most importantly, I got published again! HUZZAH! I got the acceptance letter today for another one of my scifi flash pieces. It will be featured on Every Day Fiction either next month or the month after. I will definitely keep everyone updated on this. I'm very excited to have another one of my pieces on their highly successful web-zine. The last one I had with them sparked a torrent of comments from their readers.

The second bit of news is that I am almost done with the second draft of my novel. I know, better news, real news, would have been that I am done with the second draft, but that's just not the case. With the new job and the onset of football season (Go Bucs! FREEMAN FREEMAN. C'mon Seminoles, don't do me like that....) I'm just a very busy man. I'm a very happy busy man, but writing is very much on the side for the moment. Not that not I'm not making some progress. I am. Only four more chapters to go. Ish. I finished one just the other night. I'm way behind schedule, I know. The chapter a week thing is just out the window at this point, but I am getting one day every two weeks and I'm trying to pick up the pace. I'd to have it done by Halloween so I can spend November and December on some short stories, but I can't make any promises. Not to my readers or myself. It'll happen in its own time. It's just nice to know that I'm still making some progress elsewhere. I definitely need to write some more flash stories, because I'm pretty much out-of-stock. Now that's a good feeling.

Until next time, I'm Eric and I'm an unpublished author.
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There are good reasons you're not writing
Saturday, August 27, 2011 4:33 PM
Me, for example, I'm not writing a whole lot because since my last post I got a cool new job! Last year my day job was as a part-time GED teacher at a drug rehab center. Now, I'm a full-time teacher at a high school! Tenth grade english baby!
It's really cool, but yes, this is probably going to slow things down some. I am happy to report that I just finished another chapter in the ole book and though I am over my self-imposed deadline I will be getting it done as soon as humanly possible. My wife keeps telling me to look forward to next summer when I actually won't have to work (my old position required me to teach all summer). And she's right. I will get to write next summer. I've already set it aside in my mind as third draft time with the space in between then as time to work on my neglected master's degree and review comments from my readers (and if I'm super on top of it, write a short story or three).
All is good. I'm doing something I enjoy, I'm getting to write still and now I have summers free. This will happen in its own time. I'm not putting it off. Time to write or reasons not to, it's still up to me to make this happen. And I will. Don't count me out yet.

Until next time, I'm Eric and I'm an unpublished novelist, but a published short story writer.
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First Paycheck as a Writer!
Tuesday, July 26, 2011 5:05 PM
Well, I guess this makes it official. I'm a freelance writer and copy editor for the new Electric Vehicles Magazine. I received my first paycheck in the mail today for a grand total of $265! The first issue of the magazine isn't out yet, but as soon as it is I'll have links on this blog to any content I generate. It's turning out to be a fairly regular gig as I'm in regular contact with the editor and already have a few more pieces coming down the pipeline.

Progress on the novel, unfortunately, has slowed. I completed the twenty second chapter a few days ago, leaving me eight or nine to go. If I had gotten one a week done per the original plan I'd be done by now. I think that's what really stings. However, knowing my time has been going to other writing projects, especially ones that yield a paycheck, has really lessened that sting. You have to take the good with the bad, as they say, and I can only crack the whip over myself so hard.

Until next time, I'm Eric and I really don't feel unpublished any more.
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Read "Mustang" in the July Issue of Thematic Literary Magazine
Wednesday, July 06, 2011 5:32 PM
My short story, "Mustang," is now available in the July issue of Thematic Literary Magazine. The issue is themed Independence and can be purchased in print for $7.00 or you can get a digital copy for $4.50. The link is here:
http://www.thematicliterarymagazine.com/issues
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Publishing News
Tuesday, June 28, 2011 5:34 PM
One of the stories that I announced last month would be published will be online tomorrow on everydayfiction.com. "Blood Oath" will be the top story on the home page and then will be pushed down one story, blog style, every day after that. Please stop in and give it a read. I will keep you updated on the other story, due out sometime in July. 

In other news, I seem to have landed a freelancing gig with a new magazine to be based here in Tampa, but distributed nationally. The magazine is tentatively titled Electric Vehicles Magazine. Click here to see the placeholder for their website. There may be a name change in the near future and who knows whether this magazine will succeed or not, but for now I have an assignment and the promise of legal tender following my efforts; therefore, they have my full support. I'll keep you updated on this exciting new adventure as well. Now, back to the novel!

Until next time, I'm Eric and I'm an unpublished writer?
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Two Thirds of the Way Through
Sunday, June 26, 2011 7:59 PM
I'm heading into the home stretch of draft two. I just finished chapter twenty and sent it out to my readers. I'm definitely well behind schedule (there have been more than twenty weeks since January), but I'm going to try to step it up and at the very least get back on pace. I was really hoping I'd have the book done by the end of July at the outside so my sister could read it for her beach week book. It's still a possibility, but with ten more chapters to go I've got my work cut out for me.

Fortunately, my tutoring side job has come to end and I've already read and done notes for the next two chapters, I just have to carry out my plan. It's possible. This thing is going to get done. It's just a matter of when.

Until next time, I'm Eric and I'm an unpublished author. 
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Two Publications Forthcoming: Time for a Name Change?
Saturday, May 21, 2011 5:20 PM
Earlier this week I received an acceptance from Thematic Literary Magazine about a piece called "Mustang" I wrote in college. They were the twenty-second magazine I sent the story to. Definitely a testament to the necessity for patience and persistence. They are a new magazine that publishes both in print and to e-readers monthly. The upside here is, unlike my previous fiction credits, I will be seeing my story in physical print. However, like all my other stories, I will not be compensated for my work. I'm not a professional yet, but I'm very pleased to see my work finding some appreciation. I believe it will be featured in the July issue themed "Independence."

Then, just now, I got an e-mail from an e-zine I've praised before on this blog, Every Day Fiction, and they too want to publish one of my scifi flashes. This one, titled "Blood Oath," will appear on their website sometime in the next two months. I love getting responses from them because their editors and slush readers always write several sentence of criticism each. Turns out an acceptance is even better; five members of their editorial team commented on my story! If you're a writer and in need of a break from the form rejections, submit to Every Day Fiction.

So, with the novel still underway, it's safe to say I'm getting some legs under me publishing-wise. I'm going to try to find some time to write more short fiction or at least finish some of the many stories I have that just need some tidying up before they're ready, but I have to give the novel my full attention if it's ever going to get done. Most likely I'll build up my supply of short fiction between this draft and the next.

There is one other issue. Though I have not yet been paid for my work, I now have a variety of credits to my name, including a story coming to print. Is it time to change the name of this blog or start a new one altogether? "Eric: Published" is lacking much. "Eric: Unpublished" is cute, and might do in a pinch, but this is something I'll have to give more thought. I have to say, it's a fun problem to have.

Until next time, I'm Eric and I'm teetering on the edge.
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